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哪位大侠帮我看看这篇英语文章有没有错误,有的帮我改改,做好用简单一点的句子
Ice-sugar gourd
Ice-sugar gourd is a traditional Chinese food.It's very sour and sweet.It not only delicious,and looks very nice.The old man and the children loveto eat it.
Today I'll teach you how to make the ice-sugar gourd
To make the ice-sugar gourd,we need to have hawthorns,bamboo stick,watermand white granulated sugar.(Of course,you can also have other thingslike strawberries,oranges.)
*First,clean the hawthorns,and then wear them with a bamboo stick toHawthorns.
*Next,put the white sugar into the pot,add water,cook for 20 minutes.
*When sugar boil,began to hawthorn sugar-coated,left hand keptturning hawthorn series,the right hand with a spoon syrup sprinkle evenly oneach a hawthorn
*After that,put the hawthorns hanging on the ball
*Finally,enjoy the ice-sugar gourd
Ice-sugar gourd started from the song dynasty,to the present more andmore all kinds of new style sugar-coated berry,like strawberries,bananas andso on.
Whenmentioned ice-sugar gourd,I can own childhood memories,the sweet and sourtaste,favorite memories.
Ice-sugar gourd
Ice-sugar gourd is a traditional Chinese food.It's very sour and sweet.It not only delicious,and looks very nice.The old man and the children loveto eat it.
Today I'll teach you how to make the ice-sugar gourd
To make the ice-sugar gourd,we need to have hawthorns,bamboo stick,watermand white granulated sugar.(Of course,you can also have other thingslike strawberries,oranges.)
*First,clean the hawthorns,and then wear them with a bamboo stick toHawthorns.
*Next,put the white sugar into the pot,add water,cook for 20 minutes.
*When sugar boil,began to hawthorn sugar-coated,left hand keptturning hawthorn series,the right hand with a spoon syrup sprinkle evenly oneach a hawthorn
*After that,put the hawthorns hanging on the ball
*Finally,enjoy the ice-sugar gourd
Ice-sugar gourd started from the song dynasty,to the present more andmore all kinds of new style sugar-coated berry,like strawberries,bananas andso on.
Whenmentioned ice-sugar gourd,I can own childhood memories,the sweet and sourtaste,favorite memories.
It not only delicious,and looks very nice改为It not only delicious,but also looks very nice
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