灵鹊做题网英语邮件 谁能帮我看看有没有错误
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英语邮件 谁能帮我看看有没有错误
Dear ,
Good morning!
I feel that there is much predestined relationship between us.You are just like the mother of my two kids in America.I am a manager in a fashion company.I will send you some beautiful clothes made by 100% cotton for your children sometime if you like.
I have been very thankful for your good care for my children.You are always welcomed to contact me.
Your Sincerely,
Dear ,
Good morning!
I feel that there is much predestined relationship between us.You are just like the mother of my two kids in America.I am a manager in a fashion company.I will send you some beautiful clothes made by 100% cotton for your children sometime if you like.
I have been very thankful for your good care for my children.You are always welcomed to contact me.
Your Sincerely,
邮件基本没有错误,表达得很清晰.
唯一一处：I have been very thankful...不必用完成时,直接说 I'm very thankful...就可以了
另外,落款处应为 Yours Sincerely,
祝一切顺利!
唯一一处：I have been very thankful...不必用完成时,直接说 I'm very thankful...就可以了
另外,落款处应为 Yours Sincerely,
祝一切顺利!